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You were walking home from school, your boyfriend just dumped you and you were a bit depressed. A bright yellow-green light was in the sky for a few mintues, it it headed straigh for the park a few feet away from you. CRASH, the ground shook violently as smoke rose in the air.

"Curiosity killed the cat!" Your mother often told you. But you're not a cat after all, right? You run towards the wreckage anyway, avoid bits and pieces of debris scattered all along the floor.

"Help..me..."

You freeze in place. Your eyes dart around, trying to find out where the noise came from.

"Who's there?" You pick up a rock and hold it over your head."I'm not afraid to use this!"

A white figure crawls from the destroyed ship, the end of it's antennae a bit dim.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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ReaderxNopperaby AwesomeLurker

Literature / Prose / Fiction / Romance / Teen / Introductions & Chapters©2012-2014 AwesomeLurker
hey, hey gaiz

am I cool yet? :iconwalleyedplz:

this is for shits and giggles, not for srs

:EDIT:
Thanks for getting this on the front page! I don't know if I should laugh or cry.:lol:

CHAPTER 2:[link]
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avenger-mieru Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
FINALLY !!
I can see in action my beautiful OPERA
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Ninoru Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
LYK YOU SHULD TOTEALLY MAKE A SECUND WONE


seriously well done! i love the wonderful picture you were able to paint in my head. the imagery and grammar in this piece is absolutely stunning! plus hetalia is like the best EVURRRR!!!!!111one




okay in all seriousness i applaud you on this
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
i'm writing a smut one


oh god plz help me
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Ninoru Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
no do it i bet youll totally win the hearts of fangirls and deviantart! they might even hire you as part of the staff for your pure artistic genius!
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AlderranCity34 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Teh bes storey evahz.
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
thunks
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AlderranCity34 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nO problemz!1
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Rainfeatherwolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
what is this I don't even......


why why why
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
lol you like it
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Rainfeatherwolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
-doesn't know how to respond- what
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