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You were walking home from school, your boyfriend just dumped you and you were a bit depressed. A bright yellow-green light was in the sky for a few mintues, it it headed straigh for the park a few feet away from you. CRASH, the ground shook violently as smoke rose in the air.

"Curiosity killed the cat!" Your mother often told you. But you're not a cat after all, right? You run towards the wreckage anyway, avoid bits and pieces of debris scattered all along the floor.

"Help..me..."

You freeze in place. Your eyes dart around, trying to find out where the noise came from.

"Who's there?" You pick up a rock and hold it over your head."I'm not afraid to use this!"

A white figure crawls from the destroyed ship, the end of it's antennae a bit dim.

TO BE CONTINUED...
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ReaderxNopperaby AwesomeLurker

Literature / Prose / Fiction / Romance / Teen / Introductions & Chapters©2012-2015 AwesomeLurker
hey, hey gaiz

am I cool yet? :iconwalleyedplz:

this is for shits and giggles, not for srs

:EDIT:
Thanks for getting this on the front page! I don't know if I should laugh or cry.:lol:

CHAPTER 2:[link]
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:iconavenger-mieru:
avenger-mieru Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
FINALLY !!
I can see in action my beautiful OPERA
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Ninoru Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
LYK YOU SHULD TOTEALLY MAKE A SECUND WONE


seriously well done! i love the wonderful picture you were able to paint in my head. the imagery and grammar in this piece is absolutely stunning! plus hetalia is like the best EVURRRR!!!!!111one




okay in all seriousness i applaud you on this
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
i'm writing a smut one


oh god plz help me
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:iconninoru:
Ninoru Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
no do it i bet youll totally win the hearts of fangirls and deviantart! they might even hire you as part of the staff for your pure artistic genius!
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AlderranCity34 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Teh bes storey evahz.
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
thunks
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:iconalderrancity34:
AlderranCity34 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nO problemz!1
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Rainfeatherwolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
what is this I don't even......


why why why
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
lol you like it
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:iconrainfeatherwolf:
Rainfeatherwolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
-doesn't know how to respond- what
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
is it hawt?
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:iconrainfeatherwolf:
Rainfeatherwolf Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nope
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
:C
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:iconambymation:
Ambymation Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
yup
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
never thought anyone would do that great idea
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:iconhiddengirl86:
Hiddengirl86 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
I like your story that goes along with your picture.
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:iconthelovelychemist:
TheLovelyChemist Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
OMG DONT DO THAT I HATE CLIFFHANGERS

I WAS REALLY INTO IT TOO
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
lol chap 2 is up
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:iconex-cutthroat:
ex-cutthroat Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
loldafuq

I like how people take it so seirously.
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
meh
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:iconchris1248:
Chris1248 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
id really like to see a Dr. Suess version of this lol
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
oh god

don't give me ideas
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:iconchris1248:
Chris1248 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i just want to see it done. Everything is so much more satisfying when done in that rhyming scheme
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xenaferetek Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
I bet this is a subtle middle finger to those popular hetaliaxreader fanfics that appear so much on the front page XD
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Possibly.:eyes:
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:iconxenaferetek:
xenaferetek Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
*explodes*
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
i'll probably write a porn one soon.:U
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:iconxenaferetek:
xenaferetek Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
do it
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
on my ff.net account, yes.
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kaminer4545 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
lol i just watched the hetalia movie with my sister yesterday
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
how was it?:la:
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:iconteacup-cat:
Teacup-Cat Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
why is this on the front page?
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
i dunno lol
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:iconrocksgivemejoy:
RocksGiveMeJoy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student General Artist
this is buetiful.
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
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:iconrocksgivemejoy:
RocksGiveMeJoy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student General Artist
This is so random. XD
Yet I love it
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SirenDollofDeath Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Student General Artist
intresing short and gots a cliffhanger but intresting none the less
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AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
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:iconlafeedufil:
lafeedufil Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
Amazing !!!!!
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Why?:lol:
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:iconlafeedufil:
lafeedufil Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Professional Artisan Crafter
its rather interesting to see this crowd go in the same direction of walk its between oppression & contemplation finally short, i like
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anime327 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
when i saw dis i was like o so sum1 has finally made dis xDDDD
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Theeywillnotforceeus Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
THE ARTISM IN THIS FANFIC ASTOUNDS ME.

KEEP GOING, GOOD SIRE. :iconclapplz:
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:icondenatenachan:
DenaTenachan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconshitplz:
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:icondenatenachan:
DenaTenachan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Y U NO MAEK IT REAL -ARU-?
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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
lol why
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:icondenatenachan:
DenaTenachan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it would've been funny to talk to some noppera fangirls/fanboys

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:iconawesomelurker:
AwesomeLurker Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
I think they're cute.C:
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:icondenatenachan:
DenaTenachan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yaaaaay me too.
I want a chibi noppera pillow
:iconhoplz:
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